Squares

Don't be such a square

you silly little circle

don't you dare ask where --

where the square fair is at

I don't care

I don't care

If it's fair for the squares

to lose out on your flair

for I won't dare share you

with weary old squares.

I'd rather sit while

the others all stare

and watch how you fare

as a circle unaware

of how crystal clear --

how obvious it is

that you should in fact

be a square.

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