Sleep

Empty, vast, and lacking breathing

Thoughts are swirling in my teething

Brain and coalescing.

Phantom newborn blessings,

Dance and falter

On an alter

In my

sleeping

I find my mind, awake asleep,

Adrift a lake too deep

For me to sleep

In peace

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