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His lungs filled with dry air.

He exhaled heavily, scratched his head and looked towards his lap.

His eyes were heavy and sad.

'Why come all this way just to quit?' He thought.

What other options has he got?

He stood himself up and started to move.

One step further and I'm nearer to you.

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Posted May 3, 2016, 8:36 PM UTC · edited

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