You Said That You Liked To Peel Oranges

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You said that you liked peeling oranges

Liberating the fragile life that’s been walled off

I said that it seemed intrusive

You said that it was satisfying

That one day you just realize you are an adult

And you go to work and you go to the store

And you see all of these people despairingly disconnected

Desolately walled off

And you remember the warm embrace of your mother

And the loving touch of her hands

And you wonder why that went away

And you want so badly to replace it

To be acknowledged more deeply than a passing glance

And you wonder if anyone else feels the same way

Then you see a wall

But it’s different than the others

And you want to be on the other side

So your nail scrapes the skin

And there is an exhalation of vapor

A burst of luminous droplets

And it burn your eyes

But through your tears

You see the fragile life

That’s been walled off  
 

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Posted May 4, 2016, 7:49 PM UTC · edited

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