Simply Stacy

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My first poem. I despise the lack of regular meter and end-line rhymes in free verse, so i wrote this in 45m as the teacher read some free verse poems.  

The irony is that I like how Whitman and Stern wrote their stories in a renegade dgaf fashion. The inspiration for this was a girl sitting next to me.

 

Thou art compared to a muse, 

Like a spring of love! 

Lust of thy love is a noose, 

Thou maketh my heart like a stove! 

  

On a forest amid desert, 

Shyness overloads my soul! 

It makes me hide in a closet, 

Not like a lion but rather a mole! 

 

I see thy wonder in school, 

With thy face so beautiful,  

Oh when i see thee, my lips drool! 

I love thou clothing so loose, 

Oh lust of thy love is no ruse, 

When i see thy face, there be no snooze!!!