Relatable entities

I feel god and lucifer are brothers more so than just sworn enemies

both fighting for Mother Earth's attention

just two angsty children entities

Each fight leaves me in suspension

P.S this poem isn't finished, I just want some feedback on it before I continue. I'm trying to figure out how rhythm schemes work (I know I'm not good at it). But also if you find anything else you like about it or don't please let me know.

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/4kubxu/morning_text/

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/4kw0zv/thoughts/