Gone But Not Forgotten Blues

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Who are you? Why were you here, my babe? Into these last few drinks, I'm starting to feel the breeze Did you come from the farm, my Dionysian love? The day is dead, but the night is ours to seize, my girl

Burn the grass, forget the past, blow your head, baby Drive real fast, get some cash, eat some chicken, baby Yeah

Well, you're looking so fine, I just want you to be all mine, my babe And I'll get you off tonight, to start it off right, my love Then I'll get mine, and we're making pretty good time Who are you? And why were you here, my babe?

I see my road, and it's long and cold There's a deli queen, drinking her whiskey and looking mean Gonna burn this, then I'm gonna go down below Gonna go drown real slow

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Posted May 28, 2016, 3:21 AM UTC

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