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rhar323

5/23/13

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Bury my soul in the ground,
seen it grow now I watch it turn brown
I can't understand it, your back is my planet
layers of soil are skin oil, so I light 'em on fire and watch the terror n' toil burn higher
Why do I admire you? It's an inspiring truth, my eyes perspire in view of your beauty. Truly,
it's harvest time I'm purging you from my mind, the atmosphere's too thin in here to persevere in another minute I'm leaving this planet and it breaks my heart in eights,
I can't wait so open your gate I'm walking down the terrace where embarrassments are public and I hold my head to rise above it,
can I hold my head inside my stomach?
Can I put my heart inside your palm it's more comfortable than arms so
plunge it in a bowl of sponges, soak up the blood and lay me recumbent,
I'm wise, and lies are too scary to hide, I'm buried alive in love's coffin,
it was her turn but she came knockin' so I nurtured and weened her off and
she returned to ask one more favor, could I burn my soul and save hers for later,
I said "but fate hurts more the second time around",
she said "I don't care, just don't put me in that ground."
I died for love that day, it could happen to anyone in no particular way, I say,
I've seen, nothing comes between two hearts if they're meant to be,
maybe not in this life, but in next life I see you.
So pardon for a second if I don't pursue,
I see the slew of men hangin' 'round the corner,
not one of them has my love or honor,
come back in time, I'll be your Jon Connor and maybe,
this time you'll save me instead of wanting playing
I'm praying that
in your heart I'm staying pat.
Rising from the ashes of the field, Young Phoenix both hands on the wheel, I mean it how do you feel? I'm stealing you,
this is your planet, taking it too. My temple is your body,
praise you as my goddess, standing next to me on this planet, ecstasy,
and I told you previously, we'll be together, leave it to me.
Got nothing to talk about but pain, how else to explain being the most amazing man she's ever seen
but it ain't enough to keep from between the pain of suffering,
still buffering the close it takes time to load,
hear bullshit it makes the head explode.
That's a fat lie like a chode,
it's a quagmire you chose to put your life in,
while I'm risin' the steam from my ears appears amidst a sneer
you don't come near without a helping hand, you'll never understand,
'cause retracted is my offer, I'm sailing to open waters
where smells are not sulphur
and hits are more often than gopher,
you can't bring me under, no golfer, no Jack
you're no Rose now, no floating without me.
No gloating my mouth's too beat to roll over
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now speak of happiness in pill form,
I'm forlorn, like "how can this be?"
Can we not do this naturally?

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/4lh22g/emptiness/d3nnmqa https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/4lid7m/for_my_faggoty_friends/d3nn46i

EDIT: formatting (hopefully correct this time)

Posted May 29, 2016, 3:31 AM UTC · edited

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