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Emptiness

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I was an observer / On a vast and empty ship, / Yet there was no where to go, / No where to sail.

It was deep beyond measure, that sea, / Darkness as far as I can remember. / Later would appear in absence a shell, / Phi.

When I awoke from my dream, / I realized that this vast and eternal sea / Was in fact the ship, / And the ship was me.

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/4lgs3t/nightly_thoughts/ https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/4le877/gone_but_not_forgotten_blues/

Posted May 28, 2016, 7:00 PM UTC

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