Rhwe
It’s a shameful secret to hide
when she shows up in my mind.
‘Forget me not’ - if only
I muse, for flowers are innocent.
It’s society’s dirty brainchild
she’s had me so drunkly wined,
fried in a pit of dopamine
induced death. I cry
Sometimes. Yet it’s hard to find
something less evil, less maligned.
O Lord, hasten to set ablaze
this ugly concupiscence of mine.
I wonder if she knows
what cerebral weeds grow
behind those pure and innocent eyes
that place where satan’s angels reside.
Has anyone told her
Her reign is feigned.
We’re thugs. But we’re fighting
this accursed new drug.
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