Wow!! Thank you for such wonderful feedback! You've made my day! 

I loved this! The humour is great whilst there's layers of sadness and uncertainty. 

Usually, poems like these describe three moments which are all similar, whereas these three situations give entirely different perspectives. 

Great piece. I think there's a lot to interpret here - you could even go as far to say it appears to be quite creepy! - and that's brilliant. The voice is clear and distinct and there's a thick air of naivety which elevates the character. 

Thank you fellow poet! I am glad that it resonated with you 

I like this a lot.  I connected with it immediately.  The visuals are so clear and relatable.  I wish I had something constructive to say other than I really enjoyed it!

Lol vampire schedule - you and I might be friends who've never met! (I exist in daylight, but I do like your humour)

Ahhh, I see.  The explanation certainly helped me understand the idea.  Or context?  No.  The...Again I find myself on reddit at 4 am and I can't properly think of words.  I should try not having a vampire schedule sometime.

For sure!  Perhaps try "Nature's Insolence!" 
(don't take that seriously.  I'm horrible at naming things, and I think Inconvenience is a great title.)

Ooh! I suppose you're right about the zoo! I agree, maybe I should reconsider the title - however what  I was going for was that perhaps the inconvenience is the uncertainty of the animal's interest - I was intending to make the speaker question if his/her feelings for the subject are real or circumstantial (this might be an inconvenient wonderment!)

Thank you for the feedback! I'll think about a more appropriate title I think! (Any suggestions?)

This is fantastic!  And I can certainly relate to it!  I hate that leaf.  Yet I somehow always forget to peel it off the windshield before leaving...

However, the only thing I saw, was that I don't quite see how the zoo reference is an inconvenience.  Then again, it may be because I'm very tired at the moment.

Overall, fantastic poem!

You are like the leaf    
that falls on my windshield    
that is just far enough away    
from the wiper blades    
not to be swept out of sight.    
    
You are like the stone in my shoe    
that I can't get to    
because I'm in a meeting    
and I'm wearing shoes with laces,    
and I don't want people to notice    
that you have my attention.    
    
You are like the zoo animal    
behind the fence.    
I look at you and admire your height.    
You look at me with such longing    
and I can't tell if you're yearning for freedom    
or just for the popcorn I'm holding.

[F1](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/595lvd/for_you_i_said_yes/)
[F2](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/59c1wl/bulletproof/)