Hi, I liked this! Some feedback:

*I liked what was being expressed here, that dancing is art, and that there's something intrinsically artistically beautiful about dancing. My critique would be to focus on one aspect of art that dancing shares. Here you use music (ballads),  writing (prose), and art (canvas.) I would either expand the piece to contemplate each of these, or keep it like it is and stick to one.

*I liked the title, but I feel like it might be hammering in the point a bit much.

*I didn't really like "our muse." When I'm dancing with someone at least, I'm not really particularly lost in thought, I'm more so lose in the moment. Dancing is free and uninhibited, and musing just seems like it doesn't fit with that.

*This piece had good flow.

I hope my feedback helped! Thank you for sharing :)

**#The Art of Rhythm#**


Ballads rise effortlessly

through the prose of swaying bodies

as the night becomes our canvas

and the beat, our muse.  


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My feedback:  


[https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/5diewp/she_he_i/da64x4o/](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/5diewp/she_he_i/da64x4o/)

[https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/5dobk1/a_lady_fair/da62a6m/](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/5dobk1/a_lady_fair/da62a6m/)

