No problem, happy to help.  

So, here is your first stanza in scansion: 

>¯˘˘¯˘¯˘¯   
>˘¯˘¯˘¯   
>¯˘˘¯˘˘¯˘¯  
>˘¯˘¯˘¯˘¯   
>¯˘˘¯  

It's very close to iambic, probably close enough that it would feel iambic to most readers.  The big issue is that each line has a completely different number of feet and no two are the same.   I've worked with many rhythmic patterns, and you have a lot of options here.  But I would highly suggest that you consider trying to make at least every other line the same number of feet (except the fifth, which is a linked rhyme, and so needs to be compared to the fifth line in the next stanza instead).  
 
Here is one solution, where Ls 1-4 are the same number of feet...

>I am an instrument of light  
>A lamp of actor's deepest night   
>Witness, behold, I luminate  
>And with but buttons extricate    
>A vision from the void  

The scansion  here is: 

>¯˘˘¯˘¯˘¯  
>˘¯˘¯˘¯˘¯  
>¯˘˘¯˘¯˘¯  
>˘¯˘¯˘¯˘¯  
>˘¯˘¯˘¯  

Thank you! It's nice to have confirmation that my rhythm is garbage.

And thank you for pointing out the spelling error. I have corrected it.

Dude.  You've got to get a handle on your rhythms.  The rhymes are there (and fairly interesting rhymes and rhyme scheme!) but without rhythm, the rhyme is nearly useless.  

Also, you've got a spelling error, I think.  L9, "ledgermain" should be spelled "legerdemain".  

Ah, gotcha. I dont know much about the realm of drama, thanks for the clarification!

Thank you. I do tend to use contrived words a bit excessively. I'll try and moderate them.

The subject isn't meant to be terribly deep or abstract, if I may clarify my work. "Master of Cues" is aggrandized but literal - the poem is a fanciful take on technical theater.

It seems like with what you were going for, you kind of missed the mark. You're talking about deep subject matter but used words which make the poem seem kind of contrived and a little bit hard to read as well. Like you're going for beautiful language to describe whats going on in your head but the language might not necessarily fit the thought process itsself. I thought this could have been good if in some parts you used more simple language and didn't try and go for the big wordies, it might be harder to write that way but your piece might land better if you tried that.

Keep writing.

I am the instrument of light-

The lamp of actor's night.

Witness! Behold! I illuminate.

And with but buttons extricate

Vision from void.

&amp;nbsp;

Against the stage is my radiance splayed

By beacons, torches, the fingers of god arrayed!

The unseen handed by which all are guided.

And with legerdemain is silence righted:

Light and sound alloyed. 

&amp;nbsp;

Now through the speakers comes a lilting wail,

Tendrils of aural ail

That grasp the stage and shape to sorrow's province.

They do so with my countenance.

But be now destroyed! 

&amp;nbsp;

Play those final tricks of waning gloom

As the curtain call spells my doom.

The audience cheers; they clap with glee

Oh, they do not clap for me.

I leave the booth, of power devoid.

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