Dream

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If you were a dream
you would be an exquisite crane 
soaring through a sky the color of your eyes
flying over an unfamiliar land
in sweeping arcs in the shapes of your lips.


If you were a dream
I would remain huddled in my sheets
wandering about in a fitful sleep 
patiently awaiting your next descent
and I might never wake up again.

(From a note written when I presented someone with Neil Gaiman's Sandman)


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Posted Feb 26, 2017, 2:48 PM UTC

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