I write when I'm high and I never make sense. There's the broken heart too.

Feedback Received!

I wanted chronological and gave you a week. We never had a steady plan of decline You told me her death was too big next to that Tuesday anyway.

You lack a certain dogmatism; a jargon of sclerosis. You taught me how to die plausibly and in return I died of stage fright. I told you I'm sorry for not being Zakharova already.

Who am I kidding, I am Edward Estlin Cummings and I'm emptying out our wine glasses. I am Walt Whitman and I dedicate this preemptive elegy. My hands tell me I'm an eviscerated version of the great famine When I drink I feel like the antecedent of All the Russias.

Sorry. You're not supposed to stand there; your cue is a little bit more to the right side of things. You're not supposed to lie down there it's where I spilled milk.

Can't you see I'm trying to create here? It's not a question of where the moon is it's of whom he'll spit on.

  1. https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/61bo7y/comment/dffoqjl?st=J0QZU9PZ&sh=4ce81374

2)https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/61cpat/comment/dffoij3?st=J0QZQO40&sh=57b28ba5

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