#Rule 4:
Please give two pieces of unique feedback on other poems before asking for feedback on your own. These feedback links should appear in the body of your feedback requested post.
Feedback should include not only whether or not you like the poem, but also why, or what parts worked or didn't work, in your own subjective opinion.
I'm removing your poem for now, until that's done. You can PM me directly or message the mod team to get your poem restored.
Thank you for joining the largest, most active poetry community on the web, over 13,000 active members strong!
#Rule 4: Please give two pieces of unique feedback on other poems before asking for feedback on your own. These feedback links should appear in the body of your feedback requested post.
Feedback should include not only whether or not you like the poem, but also why, or what parts worked or didn't work, in your own subjective opinion.
I'm removing your poem for now, until that's done. You can PM me directly or message the mod team to get your poem restored.
Thank you for joining the largest, most active poetry community on the web, over 13,000 active members strong!
-your friendly neighborhood mod, aniLana