I enjoyed this. Some words could be removed all together: "lady you will" " I hold no anger"

And the line "broken me down" is very jarring. I'd find a new way to convey  the meaning of that line with better words 

Thanks for sharing 

Hey man! Glad your on here!
I won't dive too much into the content, but structurally I think this would be more effective if they were coupled in stanzas (maybe two or three?). This piece feels a little incomplete on that front, and if there were a little structure there would be more inclination to dive into the content more from a readers perspective.

Line two seems like it's missing some punctuation, or maybe I'm reading it wrong. And I also agree with some of the previous commenters critique, some word choice could be substituted.

I like the formality of the language tho, as if it could be part of a 14th century piece that's been relocated to our generation. I think I understand where your going with this (a sense of profundity perhaps), so if think adding those few structuring elements will get you where you intend 

Keep posting dude ;)

In summary I really like this piece but like earlier comments i feel u could trim the length of some lines (line 2 for example) by using shorter words that could pass the same message..  the challenging part of poetry is the trimming part (getting the shortest possible expressions to pass the intended message). But overall i like the piece.

Very good! Only criticism I can give is to remove the word "for" from the second like "lady for you"!!! Apart from this! It's great quality! Good read.
Maybe splitting it into 2 stanzas or so would also make it better! But great from what I've seen

I really liked the flow of lines 1 8 and 10 (radiating, my dear, for I am). If you could pattern the rest off of those (I know that might not be possible), it would sound like music to the ear

Radiating from the light above.

Lady for you will not tear me apart. 

Life's challenged me enough. 

Broken me down and taken me apart. 

You hold no future with my love. 

You can not keep hold of this fragile heart.

I loved and learned from what was false. 

My dear I hold no anger.

I forgive and continue without a spill of their names. 

For I am set to arise from within these flames.

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