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JonLongDong

In the moonlight

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It was in the moonlight/ In which I found the stars./ They were so ruthlessly stolen from the sky,/ And nestled into her eyes/ As if that was their home all along.//

It was in the moonlight In which I found tranquility./ The moons seas stormed down to earth, / Before gently trickling into her, / like a cool mountain stream.//

It was in the moonlight / In which I found a beauty./ I found it not in a dew kissed flower. / I found it not in a speckled fawn. / I found it in a place some only dream of./ I found it in her,/ the one who was formed of the world. //

It was in the moonlight I found her./ It was in my arms I needed her./ It was in the moonlight i found her./ It was in my dreams I kept her.


A few things: This was posted from a mobile device, so after I post it, formating may be awful, so I apologize in advance. (it was, so I'm putting slashes in line divides) This is my first post, on this subreddit and reddit in general, so if I'm doing anything wrong as far as rules go, just let me know Finally, my links. I hope I did these right https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/6gdg0l/comment/dipibm9 https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/6gddhn/im_going_to_miss_you/

Posted Jun 10, 2017, 6:06 AM UTC

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