[Review Video] (Swearing) How to get chicks without being a jerk

Hey everybody :) THIS IS MY LAST VIDEO

Self Review: Any of my videos have music and I think they are good like that. But for some reason, I feel that this one could use a simple background track. I need to put some more emotion into my voice haha I know... Nevertheless, I feel I have a title that gets the job done, an awesome thumbnail, a good hook and that I elicit an emotion (in this case, humor... make you laugh)

What do you think? :)

Feel free to check my other videos too. Thanks in advance!

Review 1: https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/6iz7by/review_video_first_episode_of_my_stop_motion_web/ Review 2: https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/6ixgj9/review_video_swearing_youtuber_day_in_the_life/