[Review Video]could really use your opinion on my video

What's up guys,

I just started my channel and already uploaded 2 videos. Since i'm really new in the (youtube) game (as content creator) I could use some helpful advice and critique on my videos and my channel.

self review: I think that i do well because i just started. But I think there's also a lot of space to improve.

My video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZQuiIiHeXrE

Thanks a lot review 1: https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/6mwqfe/review_videoa_road_taken_its_my_first_uploaded/ review 2: https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/6mrt99/channel_critiqueswearing_looking_for_a_critique/