[Review Video] A fake Super8 Film

This is a film I made about the time I spent with my brother in our backyard. I tried to make it look nostalgic with the fake Super8 style.

Self review: I have been making videos on youtube for over 3 months now. I started this Channel with my friend for us to improve our skills, to practice with the camera, since we both want to study film next year. I feel I've improved since my first video, but I still feel like there is something missing, I hope you can lead me in the right direction.

The Video: https://youtu.be/Jd41RGe5M2A

Review 1: https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/6mwqfe/review_videoa_road_taken_its_my_first_uploaded/dk5tp8h/ Review 2: https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/6mk6k6/review_video_shot_on_iphone_how_to_promote_this/dk5tw4b/