As above, it's short and sweet. I'd love to see something a bit longer with this theme and style though. Insomnia to me is so long and gruelling which would be cool to mimic with a few more stanzas. 

Interesting piece. Short, sweet - as everyone else has said.

I'd rather have you show insomnia rather than tell us. Of course, staying awake is one of the symptons, but, like other illnesses, I'm sure it varies, and everyone has their own ways of experiencing it as well as expressing it. In other words, it'd be great to know this poem is by you, TheMightPickles, rather than someone else. What makes it unique, or more so, to you? 

Hope that helps. Keep it up. 

I liked this, it was sweet and enjoyable and it really did a good job of succinctly summing up being awake so late/early. I can't think of any criticisms :)

Nothing wrong with it, but I feel like you could be a bit more explorative. You talk about it being pain, but you don't make me feel that pain. Tell me what's going through your mind. Bleed it into me.

This is a funny piece.  I like it a lot, and I like you.  Keep writing!

I have dealt with insomnia all my life...best wishes!

It's five-fifteen
I'm still awake

Insomnia 
Is such a pain

I hope that soon
I'll rest my head

But until then;
I write instead




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