[Review Video] Trying Out A New Idea For A One Off Video. Any feedback welcome.

Hey, I run a series where I combine game reviews with poetry and was wracking my brain for a different subscriber special video to do. I didn't want to do the usual jump cut montages or quick shout out things so decided to try out a poem/gameplay on the channel itself: https://youtu.be/ygBJjz7qtww?t=24s

self review: In the past I've I've been aware my earlier videos I under-enunciated some of the words and phrases where I was laying the accent on too thick for comedic relief. However in this one I've tried to bring the words across more clearly (I'll be returning to using on screen captions for these in the next season too mind) Would be keen to see if this has made a difference.

I've also made sure to bring all sound effects down to a more base level or have a cut in the narrative at these points so would be good to see if this helps. Any other feedback welcome of course, cheers!

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