[Review Video] Farewell Lesser Prairie Chicken, a Zefrank type animal video (Swearing)

Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p5ssu05-UyE

Self review: With the video I'm aiming for something like zefrank's true facts videos but more conservation and education focused. I think the writing and pacing of the video are fairly strong. The editing is nothing fancy, but I don't want it to be. I'm the most unsure about whether or not the voice over style worked. I was originally just planning to use that style for this series of animal videos and talk normally in my other videos, but if this works then maybe I should just talk like this in all my videos. Questions: Does the voice over work? Is it funny? Is this a viable concept for a series?

Review 1: https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/6sr73z/review_video_how_to_level_up_your_willpower/dlhfy2f/

Review 2: https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/6sr3h1/review_video_winged_puff_pocket_square_fold/dlhe9ex/