Trying something new, please give me any feedback!

Intense

Intense is the smell of clarity in the morning For what blossom shows Is but a ripe smell of life We summon ourselves to portray light as life When light is the opposite in spite

Weed whackers and lip smackers have similarities Rope walkers and trash talkers do not My grandma told me “see life as a blessing” But life is nothing more than a game Genesis

Intense is the sharp pain of heartbreak Clenching to dear life Relapse to intensify the feeling The feeling of good although bad I want nothing more than that.

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