Lover's spat

My love, my life sits atop that hill,
her sights set on the fading sun

A flight she took in the twilight sky
got her where she found her peace - a peace bygone lost on me

She loves me not anymore I think
two minds a kind but paths adrift

Piece by piece I recollect the past
my only hope for my betrothed love

In the shattered past I see
a glint of hope, a shard of joy

The setting light through the cracks of past
shining glimmers of courage on me

She took the flight and I did not but I shall climb that hill for her

A drop of sweat, a drop of blood
a pint of soul for the worthy cause

Like rivers flowing into the sea
our paths shall meet and end in peace

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