I get a picture of a certain kind of person when I read this that just makes me want to instantly recoil from the expression itself.

There is a hugely self aggrandizing feel to this that makes me wonder what the purpose of writing was other than to contribute to their own sense of self. Also the piece is a wee bit convoluted and kind of says nothing new/interesting/of merit/ at all.

I also don't understand what "they'll come me" means. It just makes no sense.




Explaining the piece in the title really retracted all sense of enjoyment for me.
I really like the comparison of oneself to the monotony and worthlessness of machinery but I feel like this is just one point that should be present in a much larger piece of work.
Also I am only assuming it was want to be "they'll come to me"

    If this works and I have a lot of money 
    Could I still like a woman if they never saw the struggling 
    It's deceiving me, they'll come me 
    Back to me 
    Possibly 
    I'm more than just machinery


https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/7bd7kr/i_dreamed_of_you/dphnqrg/ https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/7bepgu/no_great_art/dpho2do/


I'm 19, selling my company, my ex is back, this is how I feel.