A list of 9 Things

I love the stream of consciousness aspect and of your writing. I'm also a big fa of breaking the fourth wall. However, it is quite long and I almost didn't finish reading.

This was a struggle to read completely through. The punctuation's inconsistent, and while stream-of-consciousness can work, it works better as free verse or prose poetry. There's really not much in the way of imagery, and the money aspect isn't expanded on much at all.