black______sheep•

I would look into the legality of your brand name. Harlem Globetrotters association.

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SirTreeTreeington•

I think he should be fine the art of Globe Trotting has been around for a while. But I can see how it would be construed. Maybe if he added something like Globetrotters International.

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Froot-LoopsOP•

Hey there thanks for the heads up! Globetrotters isn't the name of my brand - I just wanted to add a word that fitted the graphic. But I agree with your sentiment 100%, I'm gonna do all in my power to steer clear from any legal issues in the future haha

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kandapat•

I think the design has much potentials. Try changing the font and the sky color. :)

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Froot-LoopsOP•

Thanks for the suggestions, will keep looking for a more suitable font. Any suggestions for sky colour?

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kandapat•

Hmm... Have you try changing the sky to violet colors when sunset? I think it will look good on your design. :D Goodluck , brother.

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madjamaicawindfallclothing.com•

simple and clean, looks good. i'd personally place the design just a bit lower on the torso, at least 2". other than that no real critiques, though i'd like to see other designs you plan to release it with.

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Froot-LoopsOP•

Thanks for the feedback, clean and uncluttered is what I'm aiming for. Also I will try shift the graphics down as you suggested. I'm still trying to figure out an artistic style and image so early stages yet. Will be posting more content in the future however. Thanks!

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Dagenius1•

I like the concept..I would just say keep refining it

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Froot-LoopsOP•

Thank you. Any suggestions as to how I could refine it? Cheers!

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Dagenius1•

Hmm..well I think the picture is more important than the word "Globe trotters" so maybe invert the sizes so that the picture dominates more. You might want to see where you can add color among the cityscapes

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Froot-LoopsOP•

Awesome thanks for the advice, I think you're right!

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