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Unwilling

Feedback Received!
a skeleton needs the muscles 
to move

to feel, the skin is required 
on muscle

you are rigid & unyielding with 
neither muscle nor skin, you 
do nothing
  but I don't expect it

  why can't I pin flesh to bone 
  and sew sinew to hide.
  why cant I make you
  something you wish not
  become

  why do you stand there 
  so perfect, so still

^I'm ^just ^getting ^into ^writing ^poetry ^and ^would ^love ^feedback! ^(I'm ^always ^worried ^about ^being ^cliche, ^I ^feel ^like ^I ^do ^that ^a ^lot ^in ^my ^writing)

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Posted Mar 7, 2018, 8:26 PM UTC

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