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Elbwana

I Am Coming Back for You.

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The world darkens

Your hand trembles

Keep your eyes open

I am coming back for you.

 

Keep your fire alive

Even through the night

Look through the trees

I am coming back for you.

 

Listen to the river

See stars behind the clouds

Feel your heart beat again

I am coming back for you.

 

This is one of my first poems, would love to know if I got my intentions across with it. Let me know what you pictured and I'll share my inspiration for it.

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Posted Mar 11, 2018, 2:06 AM UTC

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