Idea for Metroid Prime 4 story

I was thinking about the timeline-switching concept I came up with based on Kensuke Tanabe's comments on how he might consider something jumping across the timeline, and followed up with a thought on how to tie the Prime series into the main series. Here's the idea for the storyline.


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It Begins

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"Metroid research center infiltration detected. A Metroid egg has been stolen and the infiltrator has escaped."

Cut to Samus in her ship, reviewing security footage. A blurry figure having a shootout with Federation troops in a ship hangar, apparently being able to teleport around as he fights, decimating the troops.

A light blinks on Samus's display. "Federation-tagged Metroid DNA detected. Target is in the area."

As the ship enters the atmosphere, and camera shows an expansive alien surface world, the title is shown.

The ship touches down and control transferred to the player, who is introduced by non-interrupting text-only tutorial on scanning, lock-on, morph, etc. as the situations come up. To immediately introduce the "labyrinth exploration" aspect of the game, there are immediately two branches off the main path, both of which must be briefly explored (with their own short little tutorials) in order to unlock the main path. (This is in contrast to the original Metroid Prime's intro sequence which is a linear gauntlet sort of thing).

The player soon encounters Sylux and a fight commences. As expected from the earlier security footage, he teleports around. The fight pairs as a tutorial on combat movement mechanics. Getting off a single good shot at Sylux, he drops the capsule containing a baby Metroid. He picks it back up and decides to run instead of continuing the fight, opening a portal in the process that Samus chases him through.

On the other side of the portal, it appears to be the same place, but now it looks like a Metroid hive.

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It gets more interesting

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See the link in the preamble for how the mechanics of the game progress, but it turns out the Metroid Hive environment is a time-altered present, and Sylux had jumped decades into the past.

Sylux's mission? To deliver a Metroid to the Space Pirates that had been modified to eliminate its weakness to cryogenic weapons.

His motivation? To destroy the Federation that had sent his brother on a suicide mission, and thus save his brother and end the organization's corruption. Plot twist: His brother is Adam Malkovich, whose death had been faked so he could lead a ghost/black-ops squad -- the squad Samus eventually works with in Other M.

The irony is that in the alt-present, the Pirates didn't just destroy the Federation and go about their business, they went on to conquer everything. And it was all thanks to Sylux giving them the means to create an unstoppable weapon.

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The conflict

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In the past, Sylux has already delivered the modified Metroid to the Space Pirates, but they haven't completed the process of weaponizing it yet. Samus determines that if she can destroy the source Metroid and all its descendants, she can save the present.

Sylux decides that destroying the Federation is more important than saving his brother, and chooses to remain Samus's enemy and to stop her from reverting the present to its former self.

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The Resolution

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Samus is able to kill all the descendants, but can't hurt the source Metroid who has evolved to a Queen. Nothing works, not even the power bomb from the inside.

However, in the alt-present, the Queen is still in the same place. Jumping back and forth in time and using local chrono-distortion (again, see the mechanics from the link at the beginning), Samus is able to get the alt-present Queen to kill the past Queen.

The resulting time paradox collapses the past and alt-present, restoring the timeline and destroying the planet's ability to support time travel.

Against her orders to kill Sylux, she apprehends him instead and hands him over to the Federation to stand trial. Upon reviewing the footage recorded by Samus, the Federation gives the order to exterminate all Metroids because of the galactic threat they pose.

The extermination order leads directly into Metroid II.

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TL;DR

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Samus chases Sylux back in time. Sylux in the past gives a non-ice-weak modified Metroid to the Pirates, changing the timeline so in the present the Pirates have conquered everything. Jumping back and forth between the alt-present and past, Samus gets the alt-present Queen Metroid to kill itself in the past. The events of the alternate timeline convince the Federation to exterminate all Metroids, tying it all into the main series.

Posted Mar 21, 2018, 5:57 PM UTC

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DarkLordRyan•

First problem, Sylux is not a space pirate. He has his own agenda against both the Federation and the Space Pirates. Second, you referenced Adam in Other M. I'd like to forget about that. I like the segway into Metroid 2 though.

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[deleted]•

mentions Other M

T R I G G E R E D

hehe j/k

The purpose of the tie-in there was to add a huge sense of irony to Sylux's actions, establishing him as a deeper villain rather than possible ironic anti-hero, but altogether I don't think it's necessary :)

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henryuuk•

Following your logic of time travel, what caused the Federation to decide to do so the first time around?

Cause it seems like you are saying during the game there will be "bleeding time travel" (A change made in the past "bleeds" over into the future, think : Back to the future's dissappearing family photo)

but then at the end it uses "closed loop time travel" (any events caused by time travel already happened the "first time" around as well, think : Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azakaban's time turner mechanics)

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Personally I'm perfectly fine with either of those being used as the result of time travel, but IMO you can't have multiple types of result originating from a single "type/instance" of time travel

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[deleted]•

Yeah, anything involving time travel is going to be hairy from a storytelling perspective and is always going to bring in the sticklers :) Thanks for the technical feedback though.

My convoluted making-stuff-up-as-I-go explanation would be that time branches, time-travel where a future branch folds back on to the main timeline causes bleeding, but a paradoxical event (such as future person killing past self) causes loops to collapse, but travelling includes a local distortion with the net effect of preserving anything that may have changed about the person when the loop collapses.

(Not to mention that I didn't spend all that much time on this).

What caused the Federation to exterminate the Metroids the first time around

In the "present" it takes place before the extermination order was given. There's no "first time around" because it's not something that gets revisited.

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henryuuk•

ah, right, I forgot Metroid prime as a series takes place between 1 and 2. (so far)

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wahahay•

This is the Ocarina of Time with Metroid Prime.

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[deleted]•

Haha, as far as the story concept goes, sure, there are similarities.

I might note, though, that in Ocarina of Time, it's literally Link's fault that Ganondorf takes the Triforce (because he opens the gate by taking the Master Sword), whereas here, Samus is just following Sylux.

I might also note that Ocarina of Time has a fantastic story for a video game, so I'll take that as a compliment :)

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Porygon-Q•

Sylux is awesome!

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NateDawgDoge•

I personally hate time travel. It's almost always done poorly and runs a much higher risk of bad consistency.

Honestly all I want is for Sylux to kinda be like a Saren, Andrew Ryan, or Heath Ledger Joker villain. He talks with you in an almost honorable and adult way to convince you to go against the Federation while fighting you along the way.

Samus doesn't even need to respond. Imagine a dark decrpid space station set of hallways. You see shadows of movement as you hear Sylux talk about how Samus is a mere tool to corruption rather than a hero.

Could be chilling given what happens later in the series.

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Ucatsuton•

Fuck time travel.

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Ronald_McGonagall•

I didn't realize they were seriously toying with the concept of time. If that's the case I think a cool premise could involve Samus and her as-of-yet unmentioned wacky uncle and nervous brother, Rickley and Mortroid, freezing time to clean up the Federation ship after a party, then unfreezing it to discover any amount of uncertainty splits their time into two parallel realities. After splitting a few times, a fourth dimensional metroid shows up threatening to put them in time jail, and they continue to split time until the defeat the Metroid and stitch time back together. One timeline should have a problem which is resolved with a touching sacrificial moment on the part of Rickley.

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[deleted]•

This is neither constructive nor entertaining.

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