nonverbal

Feedback Request

V1

let's talk  

the way they say you're supposed to  
when you love eachother  

with words at first  
and then our bodies after  

words have many meanings, but  
there's honesty in action  

whisper brushing touches  
lead to raging fits of laughter  

let's just be two people who  
converse with body language  

V2

let's talk  

the way they say you're supposed to  
when you love each other  

with words at first  
and then our bodies after  

until our eyes play catch  
with ideas they are passing  

and gentle touches lead to  
raging fits of laughter  

when you lean on me, I feel it  
more than when you say, "I Love You"  

let's just be two people who  
converse with body language

1: https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/87mm98/bird_of_prey/dwf8pvs/

2: https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/87p96i/flailing/dwf91mm/

Posted Mar 28, 2018, 3:45 PM UTC · edited

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