Dreamer of Dreams.

I think maybe your spacing and lining is off but I cant be too certain because it also seems like it could flow as paragraphs as well. With that being said, I cant find your central idea (if you even aimed at one), but props for touching on many subjects and explaining them with beautiful language and word choice.

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