I don't have a title, but here's another poem for feedback! :)

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Sitting in the front row
A slap across my hand
A 12 inch ruler
Sit, then kneel, then stand

One glass of wine
for a thirsty hundred call
One piece of you
was ‘sposed to
feed us all

If you need me I’ll
be busy turning water
into whiskey
And sleeping it off

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Posted Apr 8, 2018, 5:50 PM UTC · edited

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