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tmustang

My girlfriend and I wrote this together.

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Big wall, hard to think, most thoughts are useless overcome, overcame, don't know what to do with

my thoughts are jumbled, to easy to confuse

seems hopeless, but damn I refuse refuse to stop, refuse to quit I know my worth

im all of it, I can't stop nothing left to do

but to keep it up i'll never lose

Obstacles, the wrecking ship, my mind goes with waves.

The little bits, the crashing thoughts, have pushed me in dismay.

I do not drown, nor kick, nor flail but instead I slowly fall.

Onto my back, where I push myself to which I do completely nothing at all.

I’m one with the stillness, to keep swimming is my avail.

Til this messy head has calmed my oceans, smooth enough for me to sail.

Sail until the ship ascends

Up forever

Never end

My limit boundless

My heart explores

I'll sail this ship to all known shores

And far beyond

Because I can

Cause if i choose

I would never land.

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Posted Apr 10, 2018, 12:05 AM UTC · edited

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