My girlfriend and I wrote this together.
Let us know what you think.
Big wall, hard to think, most thoughts are useless overcome, overcame, don't know what to do with
my thoughts are jumbled, to easy to confuse
seems hopeless, but damn I refuse refuse to stop, refuse to quit I know my worth
im all of it, I can't stop nothing left to do
but to keep it up i'll never lose
Obstacles, the wrecking ship, my mind goes with waves.
The little bits, the crashing thoughts, have pushed me in dismay.
I do not drown, nor kick, nor flail but instead I slowly fall.
Onto my back, where I push myself to which I do completely nothing at all.
I’m one with the stillness, to keep swimming is my avail.
Til this messy head has calmed my oceans, smooth enough for me to sail.
Sail until the ship ascends
Up forever
Never end
My limit boundless
My heart explores
I'll sail this ship to all known shores
And far beyond
Because I can
Cause if i choose
I would never land.
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Posted Apr 10, 2018, 12:05 AM UTC · edited