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Once upon a time there was a little boy,

the best words to describe him would be sole and coy.

The boy was really weird, shrouded in mystery

though he achieved a lot and went down in history

The boy had a crush who tortured his heart,

being permanently turned down was the worst part.

The boy tried everything in vain to seduce,

the only acceptable solution seemed to be noose.

And then it came like bolt from the blue,

they boy could hardly believe that it was true.

Another girl appeared in his dismal life

and since this moment he has started to thrive

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Posted Apr 13, 2018, 6:20 PM UTC · edited

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