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This was a really funny one, actually got me laughing. I just wish you were able to make it a bit longer, get into more detail. 

Awesome job. 

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Thanks for posting. Made me chuckle. If I were to give a couple of suggestions it would be to work on evening out the syllable count of the first two lines and working on the last two lines. They read awkwardly and with a different tone than the rest of the piece because of the question. 

                Bubbles, Candy, Hillary   
         Strippers got me showing my artillery    
             Thighs, hips, chest, and ass     
            God they're taking all my cash     
           Who knew Thailand was so much fun    
          Grinding on me till my legs go numb    
       Whats that my friend? Talk over the noise    
     What do you mean they're a bunch of lady boys!?    
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[1](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8by61w/data_entry/)  

[2](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8awhi7/_/)  

Nice Tandem