I love the idea of using symbols in poetry like you have. You could flesh this out and really expand it if you wanted.

i really like the way it’s broken up to a word/symbol per line, i feel like that adds to the symbolism with how morse code is deciphered a letter/word at a time

Hey, I enjoyed it.

Not much I can critique and it made a decent impression on me :) I loved the symbolism and reminds me of a Shane video haha :)))

Short and true.  Interest is only as valuable as its effort to others.  And effort is a rare commodity.  Really like the use of Morse code to convey the use of asking for help.  And the use of "radio silence" is like not getting a text back when asking for it.  Wonder if they had memes for that in the Mores code era?  Really enjoyed your poem.  Thank you for sharing.


i am
&lt;SOS&gt;
&lt;SOS&gt;
&lt;SOS&gt;

and
you
are 
radio 
silence. 

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