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Running At Dawn.

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On rising, morning sun does break

apart the grey of clouds to make;

The softest bronze between the cracks,

Painting canvas above roof tops.

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A single cawing crow does sit,

Atop that roof, beckoning hate.

Tired, I now behold day wake,

When scene already did I take;

//

In sweat so drenched as street I climbed,

Just counting breath, distance in mind;

Running before out came the light,

But this, I say refreshes sight.

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*Edited.

Posted Apr 25, 2018, 6:09 PM UTC · edited

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