Leave Him
This is fresh off of the tips of my fingers, directly related to my currently depressed thoughts. Any kind of opinions and feedback accepted whether it be the content or the quality.
Look I don’t really know how else to say this but I gotta tell you about this feeling in my gut It aches and cries when I’m alone Constantly Longing for some kind of attention But also let’s me know when there’s tension And it’s been telling me lately That things aren’t all right I’m doing something wrong My emotions all in sight Drawn out on the table for all to see. But sometimes I just feel like you don’t love me. You never said you did. But that’s where I’m lost because it was going good and now it seems to just slip Slip Slip Further and further away. Every mile you drive Everyday you don’t call My demons tell me somethings wrong. I can’t fight the voices in my head anymore. Leave him Don’t let it hurt, And don’t think about it too much.
Posted May 7, 2018, 11:12 PM UTC · edited
It kind of reads like a rap to me -- I like that ebb and flow of the words. I hope all is well with you, I can feel the emotion in this.
What is well? Breathing, check. Hungry, no check. Happy, no check. Sad, check. Confused, check. But also detached and don’t really care, check. Lol. Maybe I’m losing it. My checks slowly beginning to sound like a tick Tock. Like Captain Hook, Down this well, I shall look.
Going with your tick-tock of the clock -- all will be well in time, even if not now. It does indeed heal all wounds, as does the sweet sound of poetry. xx
Like the tower you admire, you’ve been a supportive friend. Xx