Calico

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(My first time posting, an intimidating task with the talent I've seen here for sure! I want to put a wee bit of a warning - this is a deeply personal poem and references abuse)

The threadbare cotton

of a washed out calico print

matches the faded ribbon

that slides down her hair

and licks at her pale freckled skin

her eyes are the face of still waters

beneath a blue and cloudless sky

everything's fine on the surface

but the water is deep

and there's something stirring inside

 

The rip in her sleeve

like her well worn toe-scuffed shoes

make for the perfect alibi

skinned up knees making sense

of the way that her thin little body

is battered and bruised

she smiles as she plays

and skips in the warmth of the sunlight

and she'll never tell

'cause everything's fine on the surface

but the wounds they are deep

and the living is hell

 

She lies in your arms

and it all fits just like it should

she smiles at all the right moments

slightly delayed, but its okay, you don't mind

she's remembered her lines

she's better than good

she's unreal, she's out of this world

though sometimes you just can't get enough

but everything's fine on the surface

so you keep taking her deep

and calling it love

 

On the threadbare cotton

of a washed out calico print

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