Well Meaning Creatures

All my friends they are

Smiling faces

They are well meaning creatures

Preaching love and self respect

All my lovers stem from

Gardens of treason

Bloomed in eternal seasons

Of unearned guilt and self contempt

All my feelings they are

Cresting waves crashing

Shifting stones soothing

Foreign beaches sifting sand

All these quasars they are

Remnant traces

Of dying ages

Irreverent they hum and chant

All our futures shroud in

Mystics unfolding

Dark stones unclosing

Secret blossoms crimson red

All these days I've wasted

Blind meandering ponderings

Still I'm left wandering

Unstitching seams and fraying threads

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