Hey, you, yeah you
Can you please
remind me
where I am?
--
I must've took
a wrong turn
somewhere
5 years back
"that" direction
--
And if ya don't mind
will you do me
a big favor?
I know it's a lot
to ask of you, but
I'll pay you back
somehow
--
I can't find
the barrier
between the air
and my skin
--
I don't know
where it went
I just can't put
my finger on it
--
Could you?
(Sorry, that was impolite)
--
It's just that
all I remember
is that there was
this "girl"
you might know her
she had eyes, a face
and even a mouth
the whole deal
--
We became entangled
"in a way'"
and I couldn't untangle
myself, or that is
I didn't want to free myself
--
But anyways
that's where things
get real fuzzy
--
I wish I could be back there
although it was suffocating
I didn't mind, because
the air was thin anyway
--
and
and
--
Sorry,
I just
ummm
what was I saying?
--
Sorry,
I lost my-
train of thou-
no, my-
self
yeah I think that's right
Can you help me?
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Posted May 11, 2018, 6:30 PM UTC · edited