Hey, you, yeah you

Feedback Received!

Can you please

remind me

where I am?

--

I must've took

a wrong turn

somewhere

5 years back

"that" direction

--

And if ya don't mind

will you do me

a big favor?

I know it's a lot

to ask of you, but

I'll pay you back

somehow

--

I can't find

the barrier

between the air

and my skin

--

I don't know

where it went

I just can't put

my finger on it

--

Could you?

(Sorry, that was impolite)

--

It's just that

all I remember

is that there was

this "girl"

you might know her

she had eyes, a face

and even a mouth

the whole deal

--

We became entangled

"in a way'"

and I couldn't untangle

myself, or that is

I didn't want to free myself

--

But anyways

that's where things

get real fuzzy

--

I wish I could be back there

although it was suffocating

I didn't mind, because

the air was thin anyway

--

and

and

--

Sorry,

I just

ummm

what was I saying?

--

Sorry,

I lost my-

train of thou-

no, my-

self

yeah I think that's right

Can you help me?


Feedback:

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8ipojn/mass_consumption/dytnf63/

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8ip3g8/enchanted_night/dyto0c4/

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