On a night like this

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On a night like this,

I sit by myself,

All alone, my lonely heart,

Sad eyes, blank stare.

Fading lights, burnt cigarette.

I wonder, if you,

Out on the prowl.

Bright eyed, good friends.

Cold drink, sweet laugh.

Living high, chasing smiles.

Ever pause, just to think,

And to feel,

Me thinking of you.

And I wonder,

Do you think of me too?

1: https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8iuvj5/amanda/dyuw6eg/

2: https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8irh5w/self_reflection/dyultai/

Posted May 13, 2018, 2:26 PM UTC · edited

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