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Eelo610

Anxiety

Feedback Received!

You emerged at the best of times To offer me your perspective In a time where I was doing just fine. You leant over to rest your warmth On my sensitive skin you engulfed My energy into a fume setting forth More than I could bear.

You played your drum To which familiar voices dance. Beating the fire till soot to become A grave of all that I knew was once Was not And taken over by your gentle hand You coursed through my veins Burning all before you only to brand The inside of my skull, my reasoning gland.

To control my senses you wrote In words that appeared in fiery smoke. "Despair was misunderstood" you said, And you left with all I once knew was true. You stepped aside viewing your creation as I lay hopeless to see all that I've bled.

Links https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8lzocm/comment/dzku9dc

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8m3dmd/comment/dzktxm9 Ps: the format came out weird and I can't fix it

Posted May 25, 2018, 8:54 PM UTC · edited

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