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balt1794

'Till it breaks

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Leaning on a flat-wooden bench

isolated from the bunch

my eyes caught a color

which didn't fit the place.

 

Everyone else picked up the pace

as if trying to win the race

they didn't know better

well the path was a mess.

 

Shake and spray repellent

to kill those popping thoughts

they just want to get you back

to those well-known huts.

 

What a surprise! I'm moving on

heading towards the sun

let's hope that's not a con

I sense an unfamiliar fun.

 

Sent away at first sight

running aimlessly around the maze

stuck around for a while

just to find out that I'll be tased.

 

With high hopes I went home

hanging smile from side to side

just to later find out

that towards the abyss

I'll still have to recite.

 

Links:

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8n99gv/denial/

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8ncs9v/sniper/

Posted May 31, 2018, 1:50 AM UTC

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