remix 15

I thought I saw you.

    the last thing I remember,
we woke up, and she had a funny feeling,
a kind of feeling of a million drums, with no beat.

the last thing I remember, she said she wanted
to break
to break out of here, and
left me
    nothing.

no, she left me
she left me violins,
with no melody.
(I hear the sound of
    nothing.)

a drawing of three flowers, with a note
she said I'd understand.

    last thing I remember,
she (still right here with me, when the sun
came up)
said, 'I had a funny feeling.'

        funny...

and I believed every word
believed every word
every word
she said
    God
God, when the lights come on, and there's no one
at home.

the sun came up this morning.
(last thing I knew.)

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