Untangled (a tribute to Tupac) [Feedback Request]

i find It hard 2 untangle myself from U

becauz with U, It felt like we were 1

after It ended, i brushed It off

foolishly believing i could find another like U

but Boy was i Dumb

trying to forget UR name

in clouds of smoke and bottles of Rum

Only leading i to realize

UR Love is the only drug

From which i cannot recover from.

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