Lebedinaya Pesnya

If the afterlife

Was a dessert,

Or an audience of one

In St. Petersburg,

Then my deepest remorse

Is the image

Of her swan's ghost

In full,

Unending resplendence.

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Critiques:

1. https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8tnj4d/the_blue/e19f3p2/?context=3
2. https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8tlu9a/memnon/e19g1pk/?context=3